Angelica & Jacob

Angelica & Jacob
by Steve Eberling

         Angelica turns sixteen and blows out all her candles. She was adopted when three but cannot remember it much, stuck without hope when doctor Chinn and wife Mai Lynn become present. Not that being rich had anything to do with it and pleasant for her growing up but every coin has two sides. Dad is a respiratory doctor and mom is vice president of a bank. Beginning this story thought to make Angelica tall and thin with complexion not being the case and quite opposite. Angelica fills out nicely often the talk around town. With black hair it would be simple for her to say “I am the daughter of Chinn and Mai”. Angelica’s honey brown eyes tell another story. Not easy being beautiful going to school in a red Porsche. She must do the best not to be available prey. Cheerleading seems a probable answer.  She cannot do that well at hoops but baseball is another matter. That girl can throw baseball, base hits as well and isn’t long before she becomes pitcher.

          David Chinn is to some extent hard to figure out because he did not recently come to the United Sates. Chinn families go way back to rich farmers from Korea where they had it made. Thomas Jefferson became president back then and went all out. “Equality amongst people and liberty for all.” This new country based on different human principles demanded attention. Some were all for it and the Chinn family sold the farm and hopped on a boat. Let’s get it straight, not for political reasons. Communism and Capitalism are yet to come to blows and by oxen China is a long way from Korea. This conflict will happen later. The Chinn family settled in Pennsylvania, confusing considering others weren’t so fortunate to pay for property thought sufficient; again the Chinn families have a knack for curing illness. Maybe at first with ginseng roots and green tea brought from Korea but when these ran out converted to conventional methods of surgery. They are very good at it given speculation of antibiotics.

          Probably want me to get on with the story. David Chinn has a convention in Denver regarding respiratory disease.  Cigarette companies became big business but because these can cause cancer quite a bit of money is also associated with this argument perplexity. David doesn’t argue, but with growing pollution conjectures those who smoke could be better prepared for some calamity. Wild fires add to the problem not to mention global warming. What are people thinking? Nothing like a good soak.

          So how does Angelica come into the story? Chinn and Mai assist orphanage children with asthma and can’t help falling in love with her there. Basketball is not really Angelica’s gig and that game between Virginia is tough. Sally knows what she’s doing and takes the ball from Angelica right down the middle to score. Montpelier is playing tough. Sally’s turn again and has it wrapped up when Cheryl runs with her blond hair and blue eyes making a tough block to tie. After the basketball game the girls shower up. Football amidst guys of Pennsylvania and Ohio are still going at it so the gals jump in the red car hoping to make it in time before that game finishes. Not Angelica’s idea since Mai is very particular about the Porsche however Cheryl has her eye on Curt and they are there for the fumble. Sally’s not about to let Kevin get by either.

          Jacob turned seventeen in August which for some reason reminds him of his tenth birthday as if it just occurred. His older brother Sam and sister Susan recall it likewise. The two younger ones are Ben and Kate and are also great to be around. “Happy Birthday Jacob”, patting him on the back having him blow out ten candles and open presents they spent their last dime to buy. Dad and mom smile glad to have all their children together enjoying the fun. Jacob remembers his brothers’ and sisters’ birthdays as well. Not sure what to get Sam the oldest doubting what he wants anyway. He gets Sue paper flowers aware she will like them and receives a big hug and kiss from her. Ben and Kate seem excited with anything he can think of. Good times and now feels different, maybe because he is noticing pretty girls. Obviously Sam and Sue are aware of their attraction and possibly seem distant these days because Ben and Kate are growing up requiring more attention. Sam and Sue pretend to push Jacob out of the way for affections of the younger ones. Oh well, mom and dad are pleased. If you’d like to meet them their names are Don and Barbara pushing fifty with considerable life to live.

           Easily to say Sam and Sue left the farm in Pennsylvania but that’s not the case. Farming is difficult considering many thousands of dollars on the books at the mercy of crops and weather. They are married now with babies on the way. Bet you’re going to think Jacob has something to say about that. Jacob is used to farming life up before dawn and lucky to get to bed early. Farming is major business hardly possible without his older siblings. Barb and Don hold the deed. So there you go.  Shouldn’t mention Jacob is somewhat awkward at seventeen being from a farm in Pennsylvania. Maybe a little skinny but that boy can play football.

          So what’s the big deal? A football game comes up on Saturday against Ohio. Fairly unusual Ohio playing Pennsylvania but that’s the way it goes sometimes. Jacob doesn’t particularly want to be quarterback on the high school team. More pressure now against formidable opponents. Crowds fill the bleachers under a clear blue sky. The coin is tossed making Jacob’s team receiving cumbersome to see the kick as if coming from the end zone but he doesn’t have to position much to catch it. What a line up, might as well be against the Bears. Never thought he can run that fast with players everywhere and makes it to touchdown! Second scene, good kick way out of sight and caught. Let the game resume. Kevin’s running when Jacob holds back looking like he might throw when Curt comes out and blocks. The match goes back and forth.

          You know how the sun can be gleaming gold and amber; appears to daze us for a bit.  Jacob catches sight of Angelica and Curt is of Cheryl when the ball fumbles Kevin quickly recovers to touchdown and win the competition. Sally likes that. Not long after Angelica’s with Jacob in his 4X4 diesel pick-up truck.

          It might sound strange considering a young girl wants me to tell the tale. Sally and Kevin have complexion. The picture becomes complicated with colors some quite possibly alien to our perception. Do dandelions have a say in their existence being yellow and green seeming to flourish in abundance? Jessie asked me to write the story; a rose by any other name is still a rose.

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TIME MATTERS

TIME MATTERS
By Steve Eberling

          For Qualf it will be a busy night and he needs to be his best for the council meeting. His hives come alive this morning. In their room, his wife is very nervous. He is chosen to represent the wasps. Mirn very carefully rubs up against him to make his golden wings very shiny and puts his pollen in safe keeping.  Their room is simple, made up of leaves carefully cut and placed attractive. She is apprehensive ants, moths and others might not listen and the home she lives in can be attacked. Of course, bees will be in attendance.

          There is a full moon tonight; a good time for council. Qualf’s wings shimmer in this light as he flies across land. Birds and bats watch, but he is allowed to go. Attempts at others will be chosen for prey, but they watch knowing council of insects might be in their interest. Times are changing and not long before they attend. Kinta is a large beetle. Her size and armor assures attention and prominence. Because of her countenance she has not yet mated, possibly another reason most in that underground colony feel she should attend the council and why others do not object. Her huge, black eyes are difficult to interpret. How many images can she perceive? She is not aware herself. Because of her countenance it is easier for her to walk, but Kinta flies that night with the same assurance as Qualf.

          The place chosen for the conference is on top a tall mountain. Grass might make a safer location providing protection from animals such as bears, raccoons and squirrels, but a large outcropping of granite was decided upon high above the river below. Red and white stone mixed with mica shimmer like their wings. There are no clouds this night and wind as well. “Let us begin”, began Priven. “Time matters.”  The rendezvous is most certainly a very fascinating display to say the least considering diversity of insects’ present, but before continuing we must leave this story’s context for a moment.

           Like time, size is relative to the beholder. The granite cropping meeting takes place on is about the size of a large living room, which is only meaningful with respect to the one used to and so there are two ways of putting the scene in perspective. One is these characters are about the same size we are given variations in species. In this case the out cropping now appears about the size of a football field. And of course, the other is we are about the same size as them and again the ledge appears the size of a football field. In this story, the latter is preferred and trees are now as tall as very big skyscrapers. Likewise, time is dependent on the amount it takes to get from here to there and is irrelevant at the moment since most insects fly, and in this story, we can too.

          The rendezvous is most certainly fascinating to see. This spectacle cannot be compared to similar meetings in rain forests given amazing colors of those plants, but this story takes place in the Rocky Mountains. Insects became very adept at blending themselves with environment. Most display shades brown, grey, green or black aside from under wings which can become vibrant colors when these creatures warrant attention. Confusion of dimension also depends on the measurement used, large grasshoppers being about twenty pics tall and an ant ten. Priven is a housefly, respected by many because of his boldness and audacity. “Let us begin”, began Priven. “Time matters. We have existed for many millions of years. We have seen fish emerge from waters, dinosaurs come and go, not to mention others and you all know what I’m going to think next.” Amazing how they can communicate given two kinds of telepathy, one being to think out loud. The negative side being one is so noisy it’s hard to hear the reply. The other being pure thought. Given millions of years of evolution it might be conjectured antenna on some of their heads are strictly used to compensate for multiple images seen from yellow, green and orange eyes inhibiting far sight and therefore deduct their antenna’s sole purpose is to detect movement or odors. A means of communication is the third. When thought is conveyed by sounds one must think about what to say depending on the numerous language to be used, disadvantageous to the first means of telepathy and certainly the second but the process of talking comes naturally with little concentration on muscle movement. The term “mental telepathy” is redundant so insects avoid it.

          Qualf is very nervous about the gathering. What will this meeting hold for his kind? Kinta feels the same as are ants also present. Strange black and red ants are not at blows with their queens’ hidden away waiting to strike any moment. “Locusts have become overwhelming and are on a rampage never seen before wiping out everything in their path, including plants and all of us as well.” entered Gouln, a grasshopper of magnificent proportion and beauty. Although cousins to locusts her colony is also in danger. She raised her wings, brilliant yellow under hard to ignore.

          Imagine this butte of red and white rock mixed with mica and tall pines like skyscrapers appearing as shadows in pale moon light when a breeze begins to blow. It comes from south and now everyone is getting nervous. Priven first takes flight and ants start moving opposite directions. Thin threads of silk now hang in gentle wind and spiders come down them out of hidden blinds from branches high above. Given seemingly countless species of insects and time of evolution, none are more controversial as spiders. No one remembers exactly when spiders evolved with many traits being more to mammals than themselves, the most conspicuous being they eat meat and have furry coats. More distracting arthropods have six legs and spiders eight.  Although Weevils also have hair no one knows much about them except that they appear to be friendly. Spiders lack antenna but the enormous size of their heads such as Priven’s allow the same telepathic communication as other insects although they are hard to understand at times. One would think the most amazing thing about spiders is the intricate web they weave but the havoc they create with others cannot be ignored. Just as noticeable, spiders have no wings even though they fly. These thin strands of thread allow some to hang in breezes and like balloonists wait for currents to take them up or down before casting out more line traveling amazing distances. Whether their males or females have this capacity leads to assume both.

            Dor and Mird are first to land; other spiders waiting the outcome skeptical of Qualf and Kinta and now dragonflies appear with transparent wings and can cut them like a knife. Although spiders can range from under a pic to well over twenty, these two are around fifteen in stature. “We are a little upset” expressed brother and sister arachnids. “Tell Priven we mean no harm. We have never been accepted due to our differences but given the gravity of the situation now you have no choice. We are what we eat, a subject of consequence none more familiar with than plants themselves, but there must be a limit to the gorging.” Priven floats to the granite surrounded by strands of webs gleaming in transparent light and thinks “Thought matters.”

          Qualf found the meeting exhausting with nothing much concluded and flies home to Mirn as if waking from a dream confused how he found his way in the silver light when the sun comes up to beacon morning sounds and change silver to gold. Crickets rub wings “chirp, chirp”, beetles “clicking” and butterflies move air impossible to ignore. Grasshoppers munch away at plants and ants scamper to feed, dropping almost as much as they can carry.  Buzzing bees create a spectacle exchanging honey before the cold winter comes. Plants are amused by life around them and flourish with slight sight or sound.

          For those of us wishing to continue with this narrative we have to wonder how an ant can be ten pics tall and a grasshopper twenty since grasshoppers are much larger than ants, but then we are not talking about meters or feet; pics instead and who is more able to explain this than Priven. “All living creatures are divided in two with exception of plants. Cells split in half, one being male and the other female but not all the time. Never less, they split equally. Like spiders, mammals have an even number of limbs on both sides of their bodies and the number two works nicely for them since even numbers divided by two results in whole numbers being even half the time. New math cannot compare to old. Although insects are divided as well having six legs odd number limbs protrude each side easily divisible by three but it has been found this number does not work well when divided into one. One and one half has been useful for some time. Although mammals gravitate toward two and two times one is two, a pic is one-one half of course one being one but two pics being three, three pics are four and a half, four pics six and so forth and so on, eleven is now sixteen and a half and twenty thirty. In new math numbers become complex when divided by three two thirds of the time since three does not divided well into one. In our Crista math two and three never fail to separate without reason.”

          Mirn is very upset having ten to her brood and council without conclusion. With her husband home and children in safe keeping a decision is made by consorts to visit Nlauq, a giant wood wasp without encounter. These wasps reside below ground throughout the year. It is not like Qualf and Mirn to enter underground caverns so early in autumn and considerably brave considering their hosts’ power. Nlaug’s wife Lowe is however very glad for company. After the customary embrace and decorum Lowe suggests to Mirn “Let our men discuss strategy while there is someone I want you to meet”. Mirn is led unconditionally down vast tunnels further underground knowing quite well debt could be paid above surface. Ants thoughtfully allow them to pass by their queens through seemingly endless mazes. Kinta sits calmly waiting their arrival, her huge jaws and brownish black armor out shadowed by huge black eyes with purple haze. Arthropods’ eyes are always an enigma seemingly unvisitable given their complex nature capable of grasping other dimensions. Although known not the extent themselves, another advantage of their eyes is capable of seeing in daylight and quite well in total darkness at night and deep in underground tunnels. We can only imagine this scene taking place.

           Mirn and Lowe enter Kinta’s cavern a little hesitant but assured of being formidable advocates at any cost. Kinta knows and reasons, “I sense you coming possibly aware Priven is concerned with explanation of time. Let’s forego ‘chit-chat’; matter does not exist without time. When matter is not in motion it no longer exists. Of course, Priven is master of mathematics but gals have always controlled time. Negative   matter does not exist in this dimension and negative numbers are only meaningful with respect to reversal of time. We see future as being positive and past quite opposite. More amounts subtracted into less still result in positive matter not to be several places at once providing it completely displaces in matching directions at the time. We are conditional of time and more amazing is all matter is composed of time. Not that I am about to get in the way of Priven’s concepts, but time is zero which the other three dimensions cease to exist without. When we go from here to there faster time seems greater although less is actually consumed, more required when slowing down. Not that big of deal but reversal of time is since changing past effects present affecting future and is only allowed by masters or this conversation would not be happening. What does it all have to do with our current situation? Present actions determine future and time matters.” Nlauq and Qualf anxiously await their wives’ return. Time and mathematics might matter to Priven and Kinta, but Lowe and Mirn mean more to their husband. They are here now.

          So the rally begins. Wings spread as others march and insects swarm out the horizon without concession against forces about to encounter, plants keen about what’s to take place. The locusts are unaware of adversaries’ council but have an idea when sighted in the distance. Spiders float down from tall surrounding trees. Nlauq leads the attack and is met head on high in the sky by Kirn, a gigantic locust where they battle it out to ground. Kirn is not most prominent member of the locusts but appears to be and Nlauq insists he stand down, “There is little compromise”. Kirn knows many locusts are now defeated but being a warrior not an easy decision considering their numbers might be overwhelming, however actions are directed by higher powers. Winter’s freeze is fast approaching for which lairs must be filled; never less he agrees a standoff.

          Hesitant, Kirn goes with Qualf into a tunnel questioning the other insects’ motives. For this wasp, Kirn is not much of an advisory and a few locusts have been taken prey by Qualf on several occasions when needed by Mirn. Locusts do not see well without some light and Kirn is assisted by fireflies’ illumination posted at strategic locations along vast, lower underground passages guarded by ants protecting their queens’ nests. Kinta waits with comprehension. Kirn is getting unsettled now, apparent the only way above is if allowed and certainly does not intend to be captive. Why and where is Qualf taking him and for what purpose? Going this far down to caverns defies reason. Qualf keeps silent. Fireflies’ dim lights now diminish into complete darkness when Kirn feels incapable of going any further Priven confronts him. “Have a seat, there is much to discuss. This room becomes lighter should you desire, being of space and time guided by reason. Time and space float like spiders, brother and sister, never sure which way the wind will blow and seem to pay no attention. Let’s get to it, what everybody wants to know about is god. Kind of strange that that spelled backwards is dog and what about the cat? Surely their cells split male and female as well. Time seems to have an upper hand to space.” thinks Priven to Kirn. “More complex is why we care since space and time seem indifferent and free as cosmos around them. Existence can be particularly lonesome, a subject pondered forever. Is life a culmination of this concern?”

          Kirn is getting a bit perplexed. He has a family to feed and mate as well. “Take me if you will, but I’m getting somewhat disturbed by retort from a housefly.” This comment outrages the ants. Some are capable of flight themselves and locusts make a good meal. Priven motions ants to be patient and continues. “All things divide equally. Funny we don’t refer to birth of space but rather beginning of time, space being male and time female but not always. I suppose the predominant figure lately has been male since apparently time is casual and although it seems we can move freely through space time is not as gracious, travel being dependent upon it. Does another conduct both? Cat spelled opposite is tac. Care for a game of Tao?”

          Something snaps inside Kirn. He vaguely remembers the giant black wasp coming in flight, tail stinger shoved in back of his neck and falling helplessly to ground. Everything starts getting fuzzy, conceives a smaller wasp banded with goldish yellow leads him down narrow caverns deep below and barely remembers fireflies lighting the way, but the conversation suggests he just had becomes hard to trust. He looks around and Qualf is no longer in the room although the wasp was not observed leaving. Even more unsettling fireflies are not there either. Locusts cannot see in total darkness yet the room is completely visible without illumination from these flies. Tiny flakes of mica blended in dirt shimmer, impossible without fluorescence and there stands Priven in plain view. Being a warrior alone does not allow Kirn avoidance of fear, certainly an advantage during conquest, but its absence also comes from doing best for his kind during times of uncertainty. He must have lost his mind or is dead and concludes only one way to end the nightmare once and for all. Without assistance or room for flight Priven’s no match for attack and Kirn moves toward the housefly with stealth and cunning to kill. Suddenly what appeared to be a large clump of brownish black earth connecting two tunnels moves in the way becoming a beetle with armor impossible to breech and impressive jaws. Now Kirn’s scared; other features of this being over powered by immense eyes. “Hi Kirn, my name is Kinta. Probably wonder how your name is known and why you are here.” Kirn replies. “Tortured for information about my group diminished some unknown reason for doing what’s been done hundred million tics, purging land to replenish. Without these actions, you will not survive as well.”

          Once again we must leave context of this story to discuss tics, a year being one solar cycle and as you probably surmise, a tic being one and a half that. Then again same measure can be obtained    multiplying by three dividing by two, negative time opposite and still does not explain how a grasshopper can be twenty pics tall and an ant ten.

          Kirn’s remarks doesn’t upset Kinta and she calmly replies “You are of interest because of ability for creative thinking and would be of little consideration elsewise”. Kirn – “What does that mean? “Kinta –“We intend to be here for another hundred million tics. Are you ready to hear Priven out?”  Priven answers. “Since beginning of time we all have been trying to figure god out being a concept to explain nature, part of nature, or something quite extraordinary to it? Does space and time have something conducting both? Of course they do. Thought and knowledge are masculine and feminine equal partners without distinction. Thought and knowledge occur independent of time and space, always have and consistently will without requisite of other entities.  Because of accumulative knowledge new thoughts and vice versa may appear fleeting when and where they happen. One stumbles on new ideas seemingly replacing others but to assume the total doesn’t exist first place and won’t always be existent throughout the universe is a bit absurd. Not to question by any means the end and possibly brings us where and when we begin.”

          “What do you want from me?” thinks Kirn. “Your understanding.” replies Kinta. “My understanding?” comes back Kirn. “I am captive deep underground for crimes all guilty, no doubt impossible to see correctly and question what is heard as well. Who are you to determine fate?” ”Open your eyes and look around you.”

          Kirn finds himself on top a high mountain, not at all as imagined; sky greenish yellow and surface blue. Priven hangs above without wings’ movement although Kinta plants firmly on ground, if it can be called that. Atmosphere’s not heavy with distant oceans of mercury reflecting sky far above. Through crystal opulence maybe whales’ size of football fields float on backs barely submerged in the heavy silver liquid exposing themselves to lush turquoise sun reflecting on this mirror. Sibling spiders Dor and Mird hang on webs they string between yellow crystals taken for branches of odd trees. Nlauq and Lowe are equally at ease stationed not far from Kinta surrounded by small purple pearls scattered about. Not that the wood wasps need to stand, capable of flying in aura similar to Qualf and Mirn beside Priven. Kirn looks around to become assured his mate Alie is not somehow present in harm’s way making him bolder, thinking “What’s going on?” The others chorus, ““We are no longer there but where long before. Aquarius and Sagittarius have still to collided, creating earth’s sun, splatter also resulting in other planets constructing the Zodiac system. Travel future further should a place unusually as beautiful desired.”” “I’ve had enough” concedes Kirn “and want to go when and where this is real”. “”As you wish.””

          Qualf flies home more assured of direction than before. It is midafternoon and sun shines bright yellow, assuring least to say. Spring now fills the air. He finds Mirn in hive newly refurbished. Some of their brood from previous years went distant while others remain close, all busy making friends and hives for themselves. As other insects, crickets emerge from frozen ground and familiar and always welcome “chirp-chirp” present in warmer circulating behavior. Others rejoice. Plants sprout amazing scents, always eager for company. Mirn asks Qualf “How was the meeting, handsome?” to which Qualf replies “It has been good council”.

          How can a grasshopper be twenty pics tall and an ant ten? It takes a very small grasshopper, a very large ant, and or both.

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WANT TO MAKE MORE MONEY NOW?

 

COPYWRITING MIGHT BE THE ANSWER.

Advertising goes back a long way.

Maybe before the Stone Age where sticks and stones were manufactured to better improve performance when hunting and protecting territory from other human clans.

Pictures were drawn on rock cliffs and in caves. Were they to communicate information or meant to say “Here I am” or “Here we are”? This method of defining territory was not only the first advertising but would result in invention of writing.

Subsequent civilizations improved art to claim land using statues and structures. Previous rock art had been refined to convey information in intricate detail.

Cumbersome at first since writing required hand writing received by only a few participants.

Fast forward to printing presses. Information can now be acquired by many but how to pay for this service? Bought by those willing, but then made more affordable by advertising. This means of communication is now subsidized by those wanting to sell something to others.

Works quite well but then advent of radio. Why read something being read for you and accompanied by entertainment, provided for free with advertisers flipping the bill? Television takes it to a whole new level. Products are made so enticing by writers few can resist buying advertised produce but competition is limited to available broadcast time.

As consumers, we could only choose from advertised products presented by media or in mail. Until the computer that is. Now we search for what we want and choices are immense. Competition’s no longer restricted by space and it’s fierce.

WHAT IS COPY?

Those who write professionally are generally thought of as authors of books, stories and magazine or newspaper articles.

Copywriting is defined as any writing that offers a product or service for sale. This might be sales or promotional letters. Promoting a business or personal service can also lead to sales. Copy can be in the form of direct or email, web content, social media, newsletters and the list goes on.

With modern internet, not many people look in phone books these days for products or services making good copy imperative.

We all write and are taught to do it early in school. But a good copywriter is generally someone who likes to write in the first place. It is not always easy organizing thoughts and present them easily understood by others.

It’s been said pen is mightier than sword. It can also be said eraser is more important than pen, meaning first few drafts are likely of little significance. Patience is required rewriting until content is something intended audiences want to read, much less made enticing to spend money.

WHY HIRE A COPYWRITER?

If you are business owner, executive administrator or marketing manager it can be frustrating, confusing and exhaustive preparing content promoting business and making sales. There are many other important things to do and only twenty-four hours in a day. Wouldn’t it be nice spending more time with family at home or on vacation?

Copywriting should involve much research deriving business strengths, how they are being promoted by competition, and not only why yours is unique but better.

Good copy puts this front and center while addressing customer or client concerns and how your business solves them.

It does little good generically promising benefits if they are not top priorities. Often priority is better presented from a third person’s perspective since that’s how it’s received.

If there are complaints how products, services and guarantees are presented, you didn’t say it and can always blame the copywriter.

Rest assured.

THUNDER SENSE

Thunder Sense sounds like a funny name for a website offering electrical design, consulting and copywriting services. As been said, a good copywriter probably likes doing it.

Mountain ambiance provides this setting and is intended to make reading more enjoyable for visitors as well.

Much of the research needed to address the electrical profession has already been done involving many years of study, tests and hands-on experience. As the name implies, the site attempts to make sense of a very complex and complicated trade.

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Education of the Future

GET YOUR KIDS AHEAD OF THE CURVE

Gals night out was taking an unexpected twist.

General discussions now seem more oriented toward their young children. It was as if they were losing their grip … their offspring seeming to pay more attention to cell phones than them. Seems silly the young ones had them at all at such an age, but once a few in school got cell phones everybody was eager to “keep up” … kids and parents as well.

It wasn’t so much their school grades were slipping since those depended on average scores – but kids just didn’t seem as smart about traditional subjects as moms were at that age.

Deciding to meet about it once a week the ladies went over school books and devised their own tests based on them.

Didn’t seem to do much good. Their offspring didn’t seem to care whether they answered correctly or not, eager to get back to their smart phones.

That’s when these mothers got the bright idea to put the tests on the computer and were amazed at significantly improved participation by the youngsters – and how BUDGET BRAINIAC was first conceived.

Now gals can really enjoy a night out!

DON’T WAIT FOR YOUR KIDS TO GET STARTED

BUDGET BRAINIAC will be explained in further detail in a moment, but the importance of getting your kids started now can’t be emphasized enough. It is primarily directed toward elementary students at this time.

“Many people consider the child’s education is only a trivial thing. However, this is a wrong assumption. The children age is golden age that make children should get the maximum stimulus. Stimulus acquired by children will stimulate their growth in many aspects. That is why; it is advisable for parents and teachers to provide the best education for the children. One of the ways that could be a solution for teacher to give the best education for children is through online child education.” – Education Article Collection (Oct. 20, 2014)

A low price for this plan can be locked in by ordering now. You can cancel anytime and if you’re not completely satisfied the previous two months’ payments will be refunded.

This program is very different from all the others out there. As it evolves the price might go up accordingly … But if you order with-in the next five days your purchase price will apply as long as you wish to continue.

This low price of $19.99 per month is not expected to be available long.

CHILDREN INTERACTION

Students should have access to a computer or an iPad although it might be possible to complete assignments using smart phones with an email address.

The primary objective here is to get children to handle money efficiently but requires they also know reading, writing and math – what they’re being taught in school anyway.

Small video presentations will be emailed Monday through Thursday based on grade levels accompanied by a short multiple question test. Upon submitting, the right answers are highlighted and score points put in their personal “Bank Account” next to the appropriate subject. Wrong answers will be explained as to why making right answers more apparent, but points will not be deducted from their scores.

“Small children from small-town Georgia to suburban Baltimore will encounter a new approach to learning when they head back to class this fall – one that makes them partners in their own education, not just participants.” – RAND Review – Personalized Learning: The Latest Buzz in Classroom Instruction (Aug. 22, 2016)

What makes this program so unique is that it is also sent at the same time to other families in that school grade also participating in BUDGET BRAINIAC. The chance to interact is between students and parents alike and can easily be done by email, text or through this system.

WHERE DOES BUDGET COME IN?

This is where parents get a chance to get more involved.

It is encouraged that scored points be assigned a small reward such as money, time on their cell phone, TV, in the park, spent with you … etc. and preferably agreed to by the child and you.

Although a normal inclination to help your young ones with tests, the extent might be limited by the amount you want to reward.

In no time at all your kids will get the meaning of earning versus spending. Not much point in the students withdrawing from their “Bank Account” unless you agree to the amount. Their bank account can be augmented by additional chores and personal favors kept in a separate column.

Payment from their account should not be necessary if you just want to do something for them.

Take advantage of this opportunity to have more quality time with your children now.

TEACHER INTERACTION

BUDGET BRAINIAC is not intended as replacement for public schooling.

Think of all the advantages your teachers will get out of this if they choose to participate

           No cost to them. Should they want to participate, daily reading tests and scores will be emailed to them at the same time as another benefit of your subscription.

           An opportunity to suggest material and questions to be provided with further assignments based on what and how they’re teaching at the time.

           Interaction with other teachers at the same grade level in other schools also participating. Suggested material and sample questions will be shared.

           They are welcome to use all that is being provided in their school room.

           Supplements teacher homework assignments.

           Can be done away from their school.

“I can’t believe the difference Budget Brainiac has made in my classroom. Although not all my students are participating in it, the enthusiasm and attention by those that are seems to influence the others. Students might not accept what I’m teaching – but if the computer is telling them the same thing – it is a different matter. Certainly not necessary, but it would be great if all my students were participating in this program as well.” – Terri Teacher – Denver, CO

ADVANTAGES TO YOU

Parents have busy schedules with careers, tasks at home, relationships and so forth. Let us do some of the work for you.

With the click of a button you will know many things being taught to your kid from anywhere, any time and have an opportunity to interact with teachers and other parents.

Your questions and suggested improvements can be shared using this program in the same way as the teachers’ interaction. It is easy to see how BUDGET BRAINIAC will quickly evolve in a positive way, making it much more productive than any other learning assistance programs available at much higher costs.

You have nothing to lose with our money back guarantee. Take advantage of our introductory low price of $19.99/mo. and order in the next five days.

Your kids will be eager to learn how to responsibly use computers, tablets and cell phones while helping them study in a daily routine.

You will know what they know … and knowing your kids are academic and socially ahead of the curve will bring much satisfaction, relaxation, and pride.

And gives opportunities to spend quality time with them in an efficient manner – allowing more time for your other activities.

“When I first decided to buy Budget Brainiac I thought to myself ‘There is no way this is going to work’.  But what did I have to lose with a full money back guarantee if not satisfied after two months? Boy, was I wrong. In very little time I was having meaningful conversations with my children; negotiating rewards and discussing what they are learning in school. They sure pay attention to those computers. I feel a whole lot better knowing they will be much better prepared growing up.” – Mary Mom – Branson, MI

ACCOMMODATES YOUR ACTIVITIES

Before you decide to subscribe, a concern suggested by other members should be addressed.

During summer vacation, it might not be a good time to be involved. Many teachers enjoy this time off and might not want to participate as well.

We’ve got it covered.

This program is provided year-round. Summer months involve further advancement of what was taught during the previous school year. Your children can continue to get ahead of the curve even on vacation.

When wanting time off, log on to www.budgetbrainiac.com and opt out for a month … no charge … and can be done three months at a time. Check out our website.

And, of course, you can cancel anytime. What do you have to lose? ORDER TODAY.

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GUARANTEE: I can cancel anytime with a full refund for the previous two months’ subscription.

o   YES I want to subscribe to Budget Brainiac for $29.95 per month.

o   YESI want to subscribe to Budget Brainiac within the next five days and get my discounted price of $19.99 per month.

YOUR NAME: __________________________________________________________________

MAILING ADDRESS: _____________________________________________________________

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YOUR EMAIL ADDRESS: __________________________________________________________

CHILD’S NAME: _________________________________________________________________

THEIR EMAIL ADDRESS: __________________________________________________________

CREDIT CARD (VISA/Master Card/American Express) ___________________________________

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o   Please accept my check mailed to: Budget Brainiac, Any City, State, Zip Code

It can be done online at: www.budgetbrainiac.com           Or call: 1-800-XXX-XXX

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YOUR SUCCESS IS OUR SUCCESS

Being Moms ourselves, the sensitive nature of this program can’t be expressed enough. We guarantee personal information will be confidential. Be assured email addresses and certainly credit card information will not be ‘handed-out’ or put on mailing lists. Your child’s scores and bank account can only be accessed by your children, teachers, and you.

This program is also an excellent opportunity to obtain additional income working from home in your spare time. As Budget Brainiac expands with new members, teachers, feedback and continually being up-dated more assistance will be required. Even if you don’t have children you are certainly invited to participate in this way and feel as if you do.

 No operating costs. Everything needed is a computer. Check out our website and afford a night out with the gals.

“It takes a tribe to raise a child.” – SIOUX

Confidence, peace of mind, and quality time with your kids can now be at your fingertips knowing they will be better prepared to compete on a national level, handle money and more responsible on cell phones and computers.  

An improved relationship with your spouse (for those of us that have them) might be valuable as well. An excellent opportunity for them to get involved. Your household can enjoy interaction and bonding resulting from this experience and expertise.

Sincerely,

President – BUDGET BRAINIAC

 

Polly President

Any City, State, Zip Code

pollyp@budgetbrainiac.com

1-321-XXX-XXXX

www.thndrsns.com